Where that modifier did I put? Did misplace it I again?
An abortion medication had a wife. Who knew?
Bob D’Angelo
Can a 14-year-old buy a store?
Jan Norris
So the 19-year-old girlfriend is 49?
(PS: We will not reward these “news” vultures by identifying the celebrity they were tormenting.)
These deaths were tragedies. But let’s write properly. A skydiver didn’t die twice. How about: “Second skydiver death in two years at Florida airport.”
Did you really mean to say this was about the painting value, whatever that is, of a massive dying aunt? Probably not.
If I was that shopping center, I’d be put out, too.
The man was from Florida. But not in Florida. The next line makes it clear. The man — sadly — fatally set himself afire outside Donald Trump’s “hush money” trial in New York.
And we go to the video archives for Segment 73: Canadian Club. https://youtu.be/gUTKiaT12H8?si=fYCqLOtV_bKqGlKo
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