More more repeat repeat offenses…
There’s that dollars dollars thing again again!
This is a chronic goof. “Fuel” refers to the mob. Not the fools. So it would be “Mob of fools fuels the...”
We know ad space is expensive, but it looks like you could have fixed this without spending another penny. Just add one letter: “If you have trouble standing and walking distances...”
And we go to the video archives for our introduction to “Horribly Wrong:” https://youtu.be/Ctgr272Bymk
Readers: "Something Went Horribly Wrong," features samples of bad writing we see nearly every day. You can participate! Be our duly deputized “grammar police:” Your motto: “To protect and correct.” Send in your photos of store signs, street signs, newspaper headlines, tweets, and so on. It doesn’t have to be a grammatical error. It can be just what we call “cowardly writing.” Include your name and home town so we properly can credit you. You're free to add a comment, although we reserve the right to edit or omit. Now get out there! Send to Eliot@eliotkleinberg.com
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